Initial Storyboard

Here is my initial storyboard idea, sketched simply as there as I still wanted to develop characters and perhaps develop the narrative further.

The narrative:

1. Deserted area

2. Growth of cacti

3. Cactus 1 - plays trumpet

4. Cactus 2 - elegant spanish clapping/dance

5. Cactus 2 - state change to matador

6. Cactus 1 - state change to angry bull

7. Cactus 1 charges

8. Matador wins

9. Cactus 2 moves position

10. Cactus 1 charges again

11. Cactus 2 finds thorn in bum

12. Cactus 2 dies.

Feedback from assessment:

I took note of the initial feedback from my assessment so that I could continue with development the main issues were:

Point to the trumpet/ clapping?- i'm going to drop this scene as I feel it deters from the humour of the narrative

Death at end? - Perhaps too harsh and again deters from the humour